This weak our social study teacher sent group of student from our class to help Whaea Jude to help her doing the kai and help help make the food for the student that go to her to get food. And after we did all the cooking and and the kai, we went to recycle the rubbish and Whaea Jude went with us to show us how and what to do with the rubbish that the student put in the pins. After all the the things we did with Whaea Jude we went and help our class pick up the rubbish around our school and the rubbish that the student throw around the school. When we finished our teacher went to tell the vice principle about what we did for the school. And after our principle our teacher told our Dean too about our hard work we did.
Salutaions Chara!
ReplyDeleteFrom the looks of this reflection it seems that you've ran out of time. This is because I see that you are missing some key factors that is needed for the blogpost to be published. For example, the critical literacy stuff. I also think that you might've misunderstood what is reflection section. It says on the website of Mr Aitken that we have to do a text, not a recount of something you did. However, I think you are a very kind person that helps Whaea jude to make food for the other students. Good job! In addiotion to that, your class also helped the environment become more cleaner, so that's another thumbs up! However, it seems that some of your writing ideas are missing. In the first sentence you made, you've used the word "help" one after another. So maybe next time, can you double check your blogpost before publishing it. Overall, I think you should get a reward for being so helpful to our school helper.
Sincerely,
- Reige
Hi Chara. I really like your blog. I like the fact that you made a recount instead of summarising a text. I connected with the way you described Hornby I really felt like I was there. Maybe next time you could do a critical literacy question.
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